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What I Forbear

 

 

 

 

Sometimes I see you walking down the sidewalk
and I can feel the gentle mist of spring lift
and dance a tune of your aroma in my nose.

You do not know how may times I have wanted
to share the fantasy of all my stars in the night.
Share all my moon dreams of romance.

Instead I must be silent as a stone.
Hard and cold like obsidian

You do not know the pain of loving you
in the deep dark dread of my silence.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Sheli silver member
    December 27, 2008
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    Stunning!

    You have many different styles, this is beautiful, I especially loved the final two lines. (=-))


  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Gorgeous poem and I can relate to these sentiments way too well. I love the 'real' feel of this piece and how it seeps into you as you read it. Very strong.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 29, 2008

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    i think this reminds me of this movie i saw a while back, but i don't know the name. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest