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freedom

Freedom is moving to the beat
Caught up in a dance belonging to me
It's twisting and turning
And knowing I never have to stop

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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 4

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    I like this. Freedom is whatever you make o it. Good luck to you in the contest and thank you for sharing your poetry with me.


  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    ah, the spiral of freedom is so euphoric. Indeed it has the capacity to move mountains and render one all powerful. Nice job here.