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a sin

Throw  obsolete ideas, to  trash.
Think informatively afresh.
To assume, beauty as sheen of  skin
in aesthetic terms a sin

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Great wording.

    Be Well


  • Scyphon
    November 28, 2008
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    Wow, a very interesting take on the pic. And a rhyme at that. Well done and good luck ^_^