Memories sublime,
of talking
soft pillows
deep gazes
and wine.
Visions intent,
subtle slumber
rhythmic breath
tender kiss
energy spent.
Author notes
http://emaleth.deviantart.com/art/beauty-is-59257484
A contest entry
- Quickie 10-20-30 by Cerulean Sunrise.
575 points, ended November 28, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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My my. Love is a wonderful thing when its not tearing you apart from the outside in, isn't it? This is very innocent, but beautiful. I am glad I read it. ♥
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i see why this took gold... if a write can be crisp and soft at the same time, this is it.
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Wow you got gold in Markys contest a lovely write indeed thanks for sharing best wishes always be well
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I really like this.
Amazing flow.
Be Well. -
Very concise and nicely done. Love song in the key of G.
I like this very much and wish you the best in the contest.
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delicious, energy spent
Wonderful take on the prompt.....is it bedtime yet??
Best of luck
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Beautiful bro, well done. You just had the images rolling. Best of luck
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