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True Beauty

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Under costumes of skin
   beat loving hearts therein.
Looks can deceive,
   so best you believe
   true beauty lies deep within.


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Prompt:
http://emaleth.deviantart.com/art/beauty-is-59257484
(Beauty if more than flesh)
20 Words

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  • chilali
    November 29, 2008
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    A great write. Bravo. Good luck to you in the contest!


  • Matt Holck
    November 28, 2008
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    good rhythm

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I think you did good job with this beauty is held deep within good luck in Markys contest be well.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Lovely sentiments.


  • Scyphon
    November 28, 2008

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    This was beautiful and o so true. We must never judge by the cover of the book, nor the skin of the person... beauty is the essence and aura of the soul... we must close our eyes and open our hearts to their glowing souls

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