Restraint;
Heartache follows
Trust all I can do to not envelop your desires
Sorrow leads me to believe
You lied
Author notes
Credit: http://emaleth.deviantart.com/art/beauty-is-59257484
A contest entry
- Quickie 10-20-30 by Cerulean Sunrise.
575 points, ended November 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And then you punched him/her in the face right, for lying????
LOL no not really, but I got a sad vibe from this write, I liked this, especially how you ended this, I wouldn't expect the ending to be that way.
I can't believe you didn't win anything, this is good.
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Ty for your awesome comments!!! Much appreciated
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Woo Hoo
Love this. great words, aqnd in my favorite~short form.
Joe
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Interesting place you took this.
Be Well. -
This is a lovely write, not something I'd think of for the prompt but I enjoy reading it from others.
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Wow, this was good. Great take on the pic, good luck in the contest
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