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Fade to Black



Years of training

children unable to transition

wake up as adults

a reoccurring glitch

chasing dreams

only the elite have attained...

They're skilled at presentation

a staged facade that's constantly rehearsed

adorning themselves with trinkets

hoping to find instant gratification

a quick fix to fill a void...

To no surprise

they've become their worst critics

rewinding scenes of an afterthought

chasing spotlights that no longer exist.






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Prompt: Oh God ! you are a spotlight and I am the darkness...Unknown.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Humm..very well rewinded muse with so much depth of the soul in this piece of wondrful poetry..well done...


  • Cant force beloved
    November 28, 2008

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    YOu spoke so much truth about the elites. They do rehearse their every action. They have to being in the spotlight, if they want to stay there.

    Really enjoyed reading this.