You are my multi-faceted lover
a no good two-faced lying sack of dung.
Tell the truth or soon you will discover
the horror of a lashing from my tongue.
I know you took the checkbook from my purse
to spend my money on a game of cards,
and then to top it off you made it worse
by buying beer and whisky for your pards.
Stealing your woman’s money is really so uncouth,
Unless at least you’d win a game; and that’s the Gospel truth.
Author notes
The multi-faceted never learn!
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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well done
still chuckling -
Funny - a whole world pictured in a few lines, and all the complications of a relationship. Well done!


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Too true, they do never learn
A good piece. you tell it like it is and you cannot ask for much more than that

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interesting
very funny good lkyck in the contest



