I moved to the sound
of your heartbeat.
I hoped that by shadowing
your every move
I could begin
to breathe in sync with you,
and I hoped that it would make you notice me.
all it did was cause my lungs to collapse
and make my heart stop beating.
Author notes
option 1:
be inspired by 1 word and write a poem up to 50 words.
word: fragile.
words: 50 on the dot 
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A contest entry
- underground. (LOTS OF OPTIONS!) by brandy..
550 points, ended December 12, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well deserving of the bronze.
I likes, muchly
XD
Shelly
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I know the feeling excellent expression and poem
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thanks
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beautiful(:
congratulations
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thanks so much
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Congratulations, moving.
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terrific poem
i especially like the last two lines -
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thanks
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niiice.
reminds me of twilight for some reason :|
im not good at commenting short things
but this was goooood.
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your every move
I could begin
to breathe in sync with you, <<< this was so beautiful, i could really imagine this
a great write
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