Twinkling lights and dancing children
Sounds of happiness drifting through the air
They want nothing
Only to play
Oftentimes, this gets them into trouble
Beauty unknown
And usually unseen
As some put together boquets of flowers
For the misses of the house
Symbols of love?
Author notes
I have actually written two poems with 7 letter "f" words that exceeded the line limit, though my "Forlorn" one was good (not that I can remember exactly what the poem is called now.) This one wasn't my best, though.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This has some very nicely done imagery throughout. Children often conjure some images, as does love. Lovely piece.
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I like the fascinating impact and the attractive immageries around the poetic words you crafted ..well done...
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