A sliver of sunlight
Is braking through my hell
With stars and moons
Fallen on the floor
I'm making love to the written word
Like so many disallusioned artistes
Drinking in the hidden past
Lies and denial leave me stranded
All I know is love
Angry love, obsession and death
I want to blow you.. away.
A contest entry
- Pissed Love by Hateful Apathy.
2200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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many applause, vixen
Vampires, I think, are the sexiest stories. Just the thought of ever lasting life not including pure beauty and nick biting sex appeal, now, on this poem… I think you may need to smile just a little. As for the topic, you covered it well. Over all good job.
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This was interesting, to say the least. You kept me reading until the end and the ending wasn't exactly what I expected. And I have to say that I like the lines:
'With stars and moons
Fallen on the floor
I'm making love to the written word
Like so many disallusioned artistes
Drinking in the hidden past
Lies and denial leave me stranded' they were the best parts, I think.
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wow
good poem
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Not quite sure how to say this, but lets just say I liked it.
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Hm...Interesting..I liked it..kept me interested, the ending was interesting also...good luck in the contest.
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You're finally out of denial?
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