i am falling through a bottomless pit of darkness.
then there's something; i see a light.
i feel bliss, pleasure... delight?
the agony, depression, and pain fades to nothing.
i am in a heaven that no one can enter but me.
i'm lost in a trance of happiness and rapture,
and i feel so elated and excited i don't think of my capture.
The light is so joyful, thrilling and comforting,
i am trapped in my joy, unable to think of the danger.
But now it's too late, and there is nothing, nothing but the ecstasy...
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (E) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What does the chaos in this poem remind you of?
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I don't really see the poem as chaotic, but more an escape from it. Often the throes of passion leave such a feeling as described here. A nice poem
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isn't ecstasy like, happiness and joy? it has other meanings, but that's what i wrote about; the happy side. thanks for your comment anyways
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Really good you are really really really good
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