When any thing or every thing happens
strictly on dotted lines,
my mind celebrates the occasion in its grand pomp and show
But surprisingly
I am able to hear about it
of course, very late every time
and that too from the precincts of the shrouded clouds
but not exactly from the desired horse mouth
I am ignorant and, straight away to say , Innocent of many happenings
and many of the time I reel strictly under pitch of darkness,
While your glancing eyes
audible ears and assessing mind
are so sharp and smart
that every act and deed immediately in the next moment
comes to your august court .
So my lord! you are indeed an elite personality
having a succeeding and surpassing spot light
Author notes
a spotlight ...
A contest entry
- a spotlight ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yes.indeed you are very true and very impressive while sketching the grace of the Lord..thanks for the beautiful piece..well done...
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A beautiful recognition to our maker above...it seeps great humility with a humble heart! Good luck in the contest
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