Chartering the alluvian slide
feverishly
flesh plunges deeper...
Sinking blissfully
beyond decadent pink.
Lavishing each peeled sigh with
more... more...
Palms ravish blindly,
all tegument horizons.
Arched and pliant,
curves shudder...
Thunder catches my pulse
a spreading fire
as each sensation peaks,
deaf to the decibles
our language speaks on a tremble.
Author notes
Option 1.
picture curtosy of the contest holder
ummmmm ya 
Definitions (I have been asked so I thought I would provide.)
alluvion: overflow; flood
tegument: outer covering or skin.
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A contest entry
- Erotic/Sensual Poem/Background! Take a LOOK!!! by Zenda-Lokki.
550 points, ended December 11, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is the best sensual stuff I have ever read!! It isn't crass or crude, but leaves plenty to the imagination. A good response to the pic, too
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Ah..I do agree when you are feeling that each sense has changed its cours of the natural behavior what else these senses can do when you are captureing them into the magic of love..well done..
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wonderful heat!
well done dear delila.
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SEX EEEEEEE. very good. got my attention.mmmmmmm
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Ummm, he was hot lol!
BUT, not so much as your pen m'dear!
Very well spun, and wonderfully articulated piece. Nice write!
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Woah.. Lol. this was really hot.. I'm sure that Del got a.. something out of this write..Lol. you did a really great job.. Thanks much for sharing, best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Damn! That's sensual and beautifully written!
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Wow...
All I can say is STEAMY!
You have a great use of vocabulary here, not mention a strong flow.
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wow, that first line alone! Very cool with that contest picture. I like how it all dips to a tremble. All the best
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Wow you got these words from the pic of me?? Am nursing a semi now! hehe xx Loved every line xx Is fantastic xx Thankyou so much xx
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Yeah I could have gone without the pic
But this poem is well written with a bit of a nasty flare.
Very erotic to say the least.
A fantastic penning indeed.
Best of wishes to you always.
Tony
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wow..
I can't type very well now..the fire has scorched my keyboard, and my monitor is melting..damn this is hot lady!!
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Oh My Word~
Holy Shindig
Oy~ This is one very intense write I must say
You go Hot Momma
Hotter than a lava rock on ice
Wowzers~ I singed my eyeballs
-wipes forehead-
-arched and pliant-
I need a towel- anyone-anyone
Love this!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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More is a great title here.
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"the alluvian slide" i like that...
and the last line is so beautiful, i enjoy your erotica, it's quite naughty ..lol..but still has a very beautiful feel/mood to it, and is done with taste=)
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Oh my, it was hard to get past the pic But eventually and I am glad I did cos this is perfect C
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