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My Fragile Life

my life is fragile like a pane of glass,
about to shatter any minute into crystal splinters.
they stab into my flesh, painful memories of the past
and try as i might, they will not detach from me.
hugging me, smothering me, in their anguishing embrace.
i'm choking, suffocating, from the wrath of my life.
or can i still call it that? my life?
or has it shattered too many times?
it's cracked and broken into tiny fragments,
seemingly impossible to mend.
Bleeding sorrow, melancholy, and woe.
will i always carry with me this unfortunate burden?
no, for i will fight. i will fight for my happiness.
i will fight to mend the slivers and pieces of my life together.

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  • Wow...

    It really brings images of shattered glass and dank surrow places... Good job!


  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Relationships are never easy. They seem to live only to breed joy from our body and pain from our hearts. Nice job.

  • xxgimmiegreendayxx
    December 1, 2008
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    Really good