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Enough is Enough!


The in-between,
here, there,
he said, she said...

so tell me,
when is enough, enough?

In too deep,
bending ears,
he said, she said...

knock down
drag out,
hit them
where it counts,

when is enough,
enough?

try to sluff it off,
on and on,
you did this,
you did that,

he said,
she said,

when is enough, enough?

draw the battle lines,
extend a white flag already,

enough is enough
here and now,

kiss and make up,
get over yourselves!

hug and make up,
learn to get along!



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From two family members, both trying to put me in the middle of their fights! I have had enough!!!

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  • penman gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    excellent

    Oh my this is so powerful. And it is sad when so many act that way. Great write. Thank you for sharing.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    AMEN FOR SURE

    The very way my mother use to make us get over such frivolous fights that if unsettled eats a a family HUG and kiss and know that person before you loves you very much a love no argument should erase .


  • Desire gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Wow~

    Holy Moly what was this WWE
    Oy!! You don't need all that drama for You are trying to heal girly
    Geesh~ Don't need You in there doing smackdowns and such
    but hopefully the situation can get rectified

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • StarEyes
      December 1, 2008
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      I am not sure if it is able to be rectified...
      Most of it stems from my son's girlfriend, whom is controling and abusive, we all see it but he doesn't. Love is blind you know...


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Hey you:

     

    Let them have it through and through;

    there comes a point where there is nothing else to do.....

     

    You know, I guess this happens in all families,

    than we can ever imagine, there is always an

    "I'm better because..." -or- a point of not knowing

    what to say nor do..... I have been in those shoes!

     

    I have enjoyed this because -as I mentioned before-

    it just says it like it is, and the emotion one feels

    when everyone is just up and doing, saying, and on and on.....

     

    I loved this piece, and i thank you for sharing with me on this site.....

     

    Blessed be always,

    loves and likes,

    your friend,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya


    • StarEyes
      November 28, 2008
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      I know... I am seriously thinking of framing this one and giving it to them for Christmas! I am tired of it...


  • EmeraldDreams
    November 28, 2008

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    Ooooooo I hate it when people try and put you in the middle of their arguments!!!! How frustrating for you.

    Just print out this poem and give them a copy whenever they try to drag you into it!

    Seriously though, a great piece, full of emotion and feeling. Nice write.

    • StarEyes
      November 28, 2008
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      I had thought about printing this out and putting it into frames for Christmas for them I am sooooooo tired of it! That is all I hear from the two of them... Grrrrrr!!!

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