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Couldn't Save You

The dam has broke
The tears have come
I couldn't save you
I've fallen deep
I make it worse
I make you bleed
I open wounds
I stop the healing
I'm on my own
My guard still up
I'm in my grave
My hole that's dug
I've crashed and burned
I'll show no pity
I'm in my hell
Depression's fire
The cancer spreading
No ending's sleep
I'm at the bottom
I need your hand
Against the wall
Breathing stopped
My way that's lost
And how I stand

Author notes

I always take on more then I can handle, and I'm always in a lose lose situation.

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