My nails dig into
Wrists and
Palms
I think my heart
Might just beat its way
Out of my chest
And into yours.
Would you notice?
Author notes
Hm...When I pinch myself I feel awake/alive. Not a relationship, one-sided feeling. (as far as I know)
A contest entry
- I feel so alive by samantha jean.
1200 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love it very nice
i can picture it
very nicely
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the AN really added to it. thanks for the explannation there. short but to the point. I like it.
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I'm glad you described what was going on in your Author's notes, because it made your piece a lot more effective and powerful.
Good write, and very original. Very good for my contest.
Thank you for entering, and good luck.
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