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Never Look Back...

                    Never Look Back…     Nov.2008

                                        (For Peter and Wendy)

                          Take my hand, don’t pack a thing
                          Where we’re going, every day will be spring
                          No need for garments, we’ll always be warm
                          I’ll cover you, and protect you from harm

                          We’ll build a log cabin, with a fireplace
                          Create our own world, lost in time and space
                          I’ll play my guitar, and you’ll dance for me
                          Every star in the sky, will sigh, in harmony

                          And we’ll live inside love; inside all mystery
                          We’ll unlock Paradise, with our own secret key
                          Make love with our hearts, our souls and our minds
                          And never look back, on what we left behind

                          I believe there’s a place, for you and for me
                          Far out across, love’s cosmic sea
                          Where a star ship waits, patiently on track
                          At a station that’s called…”Never look back”


                        I love you



                       
                       
                       
                       
                       
                           
                         
















Copyright John Scott 2008

Author notes

Dedicated to all the "Peters' and Wendy's", in this world; all the silent, lonely hearts that are waiting for love, including my own...keep on speaking your heart...someday, it will come your way, love is waiting in the wings, don't let her fly away, on her own

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    December 1, 2008

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    *sighs*
    how is it that you can write the perfect words at the perfect time in the perfeect form WITHOUT BEING FAMOUS????? it's crazy! seriously, this work took my breath away... now i want it back! wow... this really evoked emotion... strong emotion... it's so beautiful! i'm just in love with this poem!
    now why didn't i think of that???

    have a nice day!

    ~kassie


    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Hey! Kass...

      I'm sure you did think of it at one time or the other, reckon we all do, huh...?
      and who told you that I wasn't famous hey...!? Lol, the only thing I'm famous for, is falling in love, and getting my heart broke...oh well, guess I'll keep on trying, till I get it right!
      Thanks for your nice words, do ya still want your breath back, or can I keep it for a lil' while...lol
      John


  • Sunshine Always
    November 29, 2008

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    John, how very beautiful this is. These dreams are born in the heart...Second star to the right and straight on till morning my friend...Excellent poem....May all your dreams come true...mal


    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      And yours my friend...

      thanks for the directions, lol
      John


  • waydownuponjoy
    November 29, 2008

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    Poetical sentiments that ...

    have a way of sighing, 'what are we waiting for?' Utopia of the mind and Eden of the heart and the stars and moon keep making their rounds through the heavens and we allow our dreams to show us the way. Very nicely shared. jy


    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Life goes on allright...

      Thank you for the kind words Joy
      John


  • Jesann gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    A delightful read
    A most enjoyable poem to read this morning,


    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Thank you Jesaan

      hope your whole day is good!
      John


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Now this is a beautiful poem I can really get in to! I love every word! But that 3rd stanza is my favorite! Great write John! Peter and Wendy are blessed indeed! Pam


    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Yes Pam...

      I do believe they are...
      thank you
      John


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I love this! For surly I am a pan. I refuse to grow up .
    Thank you for posting such a poem of hope. It is refreshing and renews the spirit

    • humblpye gold member
      December 2, 2008

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      sorry for late reply...

      glad you enjoyed, yes, I guess there's a lot of us around, maybe it's good to talk about it sometimes, most people don't....
      thank you for responding
      John

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