The rain drops fall,
They lick the trees.
The rain drops fall,
They fall for me.
Rainy days,
Always come in profound ways.
Dropping oh so slow,
This rain lets us grow.
How many times,
Has it rained?
How many times,
Since the first day?
This water comes from up above,
In the clouds,
How does it fall?
It falls with love.
Will there be another day,
To enjoy this glistening rain?
I hope there will be,
For I am drained.
Rain drops fall,
Fall with grace.
Rain drops fall,
They fall today.
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A contest entry
- Moist by MuddyKing.
500 points, ended December 15, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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it rains a lot where i live. i liked this poem. thank you for entering my competition.
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cool
nice good luck
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The rain drops fall,
They lick the trees.
The rain drops fall,
They fall for me.
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Rain drops fall,
Fall with grace.
Rain drops fall,
They fall today.
These two are my complete favorites, there's a rhythm in those that rolls right off my tongue.
Enjoyed reading.
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Well dun
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I really enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest!
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Thankyou, both of you V ^^^^ It means a lot.
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very good.
I love the way this poem flows one stanza into another, soft and smooth. The structure works well for this peice, it makes it flow easier when read or spoken.
This poem holds touching sentiments:
" How does it fall?
It falls with love."
Overall very good., and thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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