Sun setting on the moon,
Stars falling into the lake,
Rain turning to blood,
Warnings from far,
Crows in the distance,
Everything is turning dark,
No light to shed,
Animals running in fright,
The war is not over,
Blood lust,
Fangs of the world,
Claws of the creature,
Shadows lurking in every corner,
Fear of leaving safety,
Fear of you,
Fear of the creature beneath.....
Author notes
Well, this is a poem about war and abuse. Well um I just wrote something that didn't say "I" in it but it did say "You" oh well...I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
What do u think?
Comments
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very good
nice wording
and great imaganation -
I love the word choice and the poem flows really well.
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Nice metaphor for a sad reality for too many...very deep and heart felt...strong subject of meaning...nicely done...
best to you.
mystic
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