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Equinox

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I'm bridged upon the faith of this beyond,

approximately to that surrounded girth

the period from distant this earth should,

the shadows equal that to every day.

 

Occuring once by half, where equal means,

shall verify each cycle during life,

sunshine shall deduce but never hide

when truth be said, it is by fault, denied.

It ranges from the ides of having had

september song's inevitable last stand.    

 

 

 

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    I like that this makes the mind delve into it. The text is a bit hard to read on the background but not too bad. I did notice you used "which" in botht the first and second lines and that sort of stood out to me. A nicely done piece overall though


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    this was creatively interesting, i loved it, i think you have a eye for a lot of things my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Mozaic
    November 28, 2008
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    Insightful nuggets dropping everywhere!!!! Great job & good luck in the contest!