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Fathoms

Where do you hide
So far away from reality?
I look into your eyes and see
The emptyness you float beneath.
So close and yet so distant,
Dancing in the shallows until
I reach for you. But at that point
You are fathoms beyond my grasp.

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I hope I haven't spelt the title wrong!

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    I like how this could apply to oneself or to another. We often lose ourselves or others into the depths the psyche. Well done.