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Formers

Things of the past no longer here,
Formers looking back from my mirror,
Lifeless memories from the past,
Haunt me as I paint my mask,
To the bar to drown my fear,
One more drink to hold back tears,
Still the memory remains,
My Violent past haunts my days.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Oh how the past does come to linger and wrap itself intot he recesses of our minds and lives. Pain never really goes away just changes.