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Hearts Folly

When night descends to lay me down
Beneath the trodden ground
I will at last achieve the peace
In life I never found
Thoughts of me will pass away
As if I never were
I pray the wind will whisper soft
The memories of her
Where once we laughed falls silent now
A moment lost in time
In folly I had sought to hold
A heart that wasn't mine

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  • bw43
    November 29, 2008
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    your last two lines really were powerful.

    how are you dude?

  • Astaraelneth
    November 28, 2008
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    Wow, very deep and inviting...Great poem!