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entwine

Our bodies entwine
And fingers trace a path…over

Skin as soft as silken scarves
which lies beneath my hands

twin peaks rising up

our flesh gliding together
in this rhythm of love

Your breath on my skin
Body to body, dancing in abandon sweet

A well practiced art

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Beautiful and tastefully done. The imagery is rich but not overpowering but romantic. I really enjoyed reading this


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Lovely to hear from you! It is great to know you are still writing - and great to know you can still produce something of the senses.


  • Have left the stage gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    it sure is a well practiced art, well done, nice work,.