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Freakin Drama

You say stuff about me
Like I can't hear.
The wierd thing is that
Your right here in my ear.
You build yourself up,
By tearing others down.
I want to speak up,
But against all the drama,
All the freakin drama,
I can't make a sound.

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  • this was a really good write! i loved every bit of it =] keep up the good work your a great writer! =] x


  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    The inner workings of the mind are often not our best friends Many times I've wished them silence only to find they were right LOL


  • Mozaic
    November 28, 2008
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    Always a catch 22 scenario...damned if you do, damned if you don't! I remember days like these...and when no one else is thinking back on these tarnished moments, you become your worse enemy by not forgetting and letting go following you to your next phase in life!