I feel like giving up as a writer,
in poetry I seem to fail,
I try so hard to write a poem
but I never seem to prevail.
I can't get the rhythm right,
and my words seem a mess,
I try the best I can with it
but I will always be a poetess.
It is a dream to be published
with really good poems to see,
maybe one day I'll write a good poem
that will astonish you and me.
I hope, I dream, I have one wish
that I will one day succeed,
but for now all I can do
is find other poems to read.
Author notes
Poetess= Less of a poet
A contest entry
- Have you ? by aurora13.
520 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
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You just made me smile ... Your poem is Nice, honest, simple and innocent 
Thanks for your entry, Good Luck!



