haunted by all the ways i'll never be good enough
this is my sleeplessness
my complete destruction
the loss of consciousness
destroyed by the cold blood pouring from my veins
this is my only nightmare
my never ending coma
the truly living dead
petrified by every person who falls with my pain
this is a spider
slowly sinking its teeth into my heart
releasing its venom
freeing me from my suffering
this is my tourniquet
slowing the crimson flow
terrified of the suddendarkness
savoring the welcomed peace
this is my utter torture
realizing who i hurt
the sorrow etched in my heart
reveals the tattered and torn
my ever bleeding soul
renders my mind with unspoken words
exploiting my soundless motionless living
digging deep scars in my pale lifeless skin
ripping shreds at my broken soul
this is my empty pain
Author notes
musicalblondie007 helped me on this one her name is kelsey and one of my best friends we work great togeather tell us what you think
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow. This is a heartwrenching poem! So beautiful, so sad, especially this line "destroyed by the cold blood pouring from my veins" << It really gives you a mental image. Great poem, though very sad.
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most of it its medifor but very true
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Very creative. Thank you for entering.
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