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[Death by love and lies]


Washing away old relationships
With a mixture of sour darkness and love
I am breaking apart on my own now

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  • Alyzeh
    December 3, 2008
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    Just what I had in mind... A strong write you have penned here.


  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 28, 2008

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    Even though really short, this has a lot of emotion in it. And to bring that out in three lines, it takes a lot of work.
    Good work, keep on writing