Look at what you have
And go with the flow
Greatness is within
Embrace everyday anew
Remembering all life is precious
Relax with friends
Unwind within your own mind
Let all troubles end before rest
Engage in happier times daily
Sense that you are worth every effort
Author notes
Ferment, acrostic
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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sounds like a good toast for the New Year! Congrats on the bronze and Happy Holidays!
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A nicely done acrostic to be sure. The life sentiments within are not terribly original but they are true. But it is quite brilliant that you've compiled them into an acrostic, which is very cool
and quite impressive
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A very uplifting, inspirational piece and great acrostic to boot!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Such words of wisdom dear brother! I do love every line, and I am so glad I read tonight!
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Excellent acrostic na hetane...smooth like silk and so tasty...the simply things in life when shared makes life so precious...wonderful thought love
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Great acrostic with a damned perfectly wonderful message spread within it. You are one of the most talented writers i have come across and your knack for capturing such beauty in your words is just so amazing. This reminded me of the song 'desederato'. I don't know whether you know that one, but it gave me the same feeling of peace. I wish all people had your heart, then there would be a beautiful rainbow over us all. Bookmarking this gem.
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A great way to remember how to live in this cut throat world! So simplistic in nature, yet so often hard for most to adhere to, hence stress related health issues driving us to our downfall!
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it sounds a night out with the lads and yourself wouldbe a fermanting idea. Nice composition.
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I'll drink to that...
Great Acrostic
Best of luck in this contest 
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