Whats that you say Santa?
I can't hear you too well.
My blackberry's acting up,
someone down here is ringing a bell.
The mice have just informed me,
they're having a big party tonight,
Wont be any quiet in their house,
got a band that's out-of-sight.
Not gonna be sugarplums,
dancing in children's heads.
You'll be pretty lucky,
if they're even in bed.
Mom & Dad will be rocking,
with the partying mice.
So dont worry about clatter,
at least that will be nice.
The night will be overcast,
I suggest the GPS.
Landing lights are installed,
so please don't stress.
If you want to talk to the reindeer,
send them all a message via text.
I issued them the BB Storm,
know where to go next.
Stay away from the eggnog,
It's surely been spiked.
Peanut-butter nut cookies,
the kind you dislike.
OK Santa, let's get on the ball,
you need anything else, give me a call.
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To be honest, this is one of the first poem that ever made me smile and giggle while reading them. I, for that alone, thank you. xD
Thank you for entering,
and good luck!
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HaH! not once, has a humor poem ever actually made me laugh, especially all the way through i thought this was cute and hilarious and the picture made me giggle to. Really great work here, im very impressed.
thank you for entering,
Laura -
Well done here hon. This is absolutely a cute piece. Wish you the best in this contest.
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he he he great poem - made me giggle to think of "high-techSanta"
Thank You for entering my contest
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very good
This poem is really good. Its makes me laugh, all I can see is Santas sleigh covered in mobles and GPS.
And the reindeer texting!
The structure is good, it reads like a conversation.
I think this is a really good poem overall.
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I love the idea of a high-tech santa using GPS on his sleigh, all the reindeer connected for communication by blue tooth! lol!
This is a fun, warm and charming poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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