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White Wall of Insanity

Looking down the narrow path
Trying to see what is not there
The blank of the white wall
Soon drives me mad

The insanity that creeps around me
As i begin to see things all around
I reach out and touch
But all i feel is the cold night air

Oh how i wish i could think
Even for the slightest moment
If i could just think
To drive the white wall out

the white wall of insanity
The White Wall that drives me mad
I find myself staring down the narrow path
The narrow path lined with the
White Wall of Insanity

Author notes

William Shakespeare helped me write this.

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    You are bats but I don't care
    because I have brains to spare
    You can have a few of mine
    and then you will be just fine

    Tiki Cat
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    "Too Good For Humans"


  • Painted Nails
    December 1, 2008

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    Great piece! You definitely have a talent for poetry, keep it up! I love the second stanza... absolutely brilliant! Nicely done.
    Sydney


  • StickyNote5
    November 29, 2008

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    wow i really like this i can relate. u know how sometimes u read a poemand ur heart stops, well u did it!