I look back at what we had,
me and you dad.
But then a rember thats the past,
we dont have that,
its not in my grasp.
no matter how much I wish or how much I pray,
youll never come back this day.
so all I can do is close my eyes,
and wish I was with you.
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emotion: nostalgic -sentimental longing or wishful affection for the past♥ , fix this!!!! gawd dont forget chlesye!!
A contest entry
- goodbye&thanks for the memories--[prose&freeverse.] by innocence jaded.xx.
400 points, ended December 22, 2008, 20 entries
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Very well done
Heart felt piece indeed and I so loved my Dad as well but he has been passed now for 18 years and yet I can still smell him about me the sawdust from his carpentry work and I smile
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Thank you for teh wonderful comment!
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emotion: nostalgic -sentimental longing or wishful affection for the past♥
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