To love someone...
Is it stupid to love
A person who does
Not love you back?
I love him, yet
He avoids me.
Oh, how I hate this treatment.
He is cruel,
When I thought him kind.
He is bitter,
When I thought him sweet.
Why does he seek to torture me?!?
What did I ever do,
But love him?
I gave him my heart,
Yet he threw it away
All for nothing.
And, now,
I can not face him.
Even though my friends
Drag me to him.
I wrench away, and run.
Is is stupid to love
A person who does
Not love you back?
I think it is.
A contest entry
- Pissed Love by Hateful Apathy.
2200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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I think your last line said my answer. I don't have anything to say. Let's just put this on the finalists list for the time being.
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You should kick your friends' asses for dragging you to him
For some reason, I liked the choppy style of it, where it had flow, but an unconventional kind. It gave more feeling to the poem I thought. Pretty rad...
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