Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Kimchi

Dampness of dark earth,

roots unwind

freeing the cabbage,

placed in tightly held basket

that contains remnants

of last summer’s yield.

 

Knife descends

on kitchen table,

splicing in half

the cabbage’s life,

a small pot warms

ginger that nestles

by the red chili,

last pinch of salt

thrown in with hope

as ingredients pour

into grandmother’s clay pot

to be buried outside

beneath hills that overlook

her final resting place

viewing invisible boundaries.

 

The people wait

for summer to commence,

the pot will be opened

and life will consume

grains of happiness

adorned with spiced wonder,

united with love of family

and bounties of a shared land.

  

Author notes

Kimchi: the traditional dish of Korea.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Melodies
    December 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    OOOoooooooooooooo!! I could feel it and see it and smell the good cabbage cooking. LOVELY!


  • RareFlower
    November 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Good write. Good luck in the contest


  • Candy6
    November 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    "Kimchi", is a hot spicy korean cabbage and vegetable dish. Good poem although.