Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

He && I. You && Her.

It’s like 2different lives
Worlds apart
Yet somewhere and somehow
They end up entwining

When you’re with her
You’re one person
And then when you’re talking to me
You’re another

She doesn’t know about me
And I barely know about her
But yet
You’ve got us both wrapped round your little finger

And sometimes I feel so sorry
For that young woman, you call a girlfriend
Because you’d break her heart so terribly
If she had any idea of the things you said to me.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • samantha jean
    November 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    "And sometimes I feel so sorry
    For that young woman, you call a girlfriend
    Because you’d break her heart so terribly
    If she had any idea of the things you said to me. " - Very sad, and powerful ending.
    I can feel a lot of emotion in this. Great write. Good luck in the contest.