follow the likeness of an angel
though a new path would tempt,
and change you
you know
the goals you've set
are shoved aside
you've a guilty concience
you know
overwhelming stress floods your mind
until you scream out in frustration
the want to be the angel
isn't strong enough
you know
Author notes
just thoughts
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Oh my freaking, I loved this one! your amazing, so keep freakin writing!
smiles,
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Sometimes, it is just too easy to not want to do the right thing...and sometimes, it feels better to not do the right thing.
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good thoughts
the only thing i will say is it is a lil hard to follow in the order that the lines are in, but other than that i get the meaning and it's pretty good. -
Don't revise it...
Very introspective and accurate flow of thoughts grafted into poetic form, I said it before, Kassie, you're a very talented soul...you have a way of hitting the spot, feminine intuition, I dunno...but there's something in you that really inspires, you're not just good, you're brilliant...I don't patronise, nor do I compromise my true feelings, I'm not a sell out...I just know there are certain people around who shock me into reality
this piece of writing does exactly that...I dunno who you aimed it at, but it hit me hard where it really hurts, it may be all about someone or something else, maybe I'm paranoid, but you could have been talking about me... what is it that makes me feel like that...
If the shoe fits, wear it...as they say, I only got one pair of shoes, how come you knew the size...
You have a gift girl
John
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simple yet meaningful, i can feel this one..
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