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winter chill . . .
a storm pours
off my hat




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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    this is how we see the world...from the things in fromt of our eyes, and then beyond...PK


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    I can relate to this It was three below zero in Calgary this week and when you are working outside and take your hat off it is a steam factory Very good haiku


  • poetgirl25
    November 30, 2008

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    I hope your hat at least kept the rest of you dry! LOL...fun image


  • Mari Goes gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    And your hat isn't a small one
    Good thing to happen when we are thirsty.
    Loved the imagery here Don


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    LOL
    must be quite a storm, nice piece here
    Haiku'es are always great to read...

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