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The Cold Fire

The Cold fire
burns wickedly inside of me
I have the full desire
To run free

But I'm chained down
I feel trapt and forgotten
I cannot move nor make a sound
Have you ever felt the feeling of nothin'

This longing desire
I'm fighting inside of me
Is burning yet freezing
Could you please save me

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  • MaddCuppyCake
    March 15

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    i'm not sure i could help save u from this feeling, but i know wat its like. u wonna run from it, yet almost embrace it and see where it takes u at the same time... great write

    • =]

      Thank you. And yeah, i get the feeling that i wanna know where it takes me...but yet i also want so many different things....i just feel lost ya know


  • Rib-Cage-92
    February 16

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    Probably not but I can still be your best friend....lol. I really like this one. It describes you well...especially about running free. But specify something for me would you? Why do you feel trapped?

    • hey love

      hey i totally forgot you had AP...but trapped....ummm...well I mean ....I guess I kinda wrote it when I was just missin Jason...and I felt alone...forgotten...and just idk trapped cause ya know I cant even go anywhere with the boyfriend that I have now just cause im not 16 and hes 18.....stupid? ya i know....but CALLL ME