Bite your bitter tongue
Because your words are useless
I told you again and again
And you said you were fine
But you told me the same thing with a tear in your eye
Broken through the silence
I twist my arm around my face
But you see my shame
I've always been a lie in its self
And you said things would stay the same
But you fell through the clouds again that day
Color, sound and words
Youre blind of everything
When you wake up
I will have changed
From the crash and burn
That you placed next to me
A world of chaos and alibies too pure to stain
Leave me here alone
So we can finally go separate ways
One road past another
Letting go after my friend broke my calm environment for writing. Its kind of inspired by acoustic and indi music.
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very good
I love the opening lines in stanza 1:
"Bite your bitter tongue
Because your words are useless"
They set the mood of seriousness and honesty when dealing with such a situation.
The layout of this poem is very good, it gives the feeling that you are listening to the words being said.
The last 3 lines leave the poem on a beautifully poignant note:
"Leave me here alone
So we can finally go separate ways
One road past another"
Very good.
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Thank you very much XD
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