Love is a promise
Love is a souvenir
Once it's given it's never forgotten and
It will never disappear
I was giving two arms
To hold you
I was giving to eyes to
See you
I was giving to legs
To run and save you
From all harm
I was giving two arms
To catch you when you fall and
Hold you within my arms but
I was giving one heart to
Love you with and
One soul to live
My heart longs to see you
My love yearns for you
True beauty
One desire
Two people
One heart
If you wanted to see heaven
I'd take you all the way to the top
The top of the stair way
If you wanted to hold my hand
I rather let you hold me
Close and tight
If you wanted to take me
To the stars
I'd say I'm already seeing them
Because you are my shining star
My teddy-bear
That I sleep with at night
My angel watching me through the night
My one and only love
I never want to let you go
Please don't let go
Because you are what keeps me alive
Our love brings only one true guarantee
No matter what we will always be together
Even if we separate we will always be
There for one another
I love you...
Author notes
tell me what you think =]
A contest entry
- Give me your Romantic poetry. by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended November 26, 53 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very nicely written poem. I don't download youtube very well on my computer so I couldn't really see that. However, I do give you points for being very creative. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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This is just how love is and how beautiful it can be if it's shared between two loving individuals. Beautiful and expressive, it's how I want my partner and I to be forever.
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it wonderful!! i love it. it really explains what true love is
especially
"Love is a promise
Love is a souvenir
Once it's given it's never forgotten and
It will never disappear"
oh yeh and i think the rhymings great!
keep it up! and GOOD LUCK!!! -
"Love is a promise
Love is a souvenir
Once it's given it's never forgotten and
It will never disappear " - Love this beginning, it drew me in right away.
Beautifully written, good luck in the contest.
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