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K.I.S.S.

Let principles of Occam shave your mind
and let the poet shave your very soul.
Do not let metric verses intertwined,
intimidate your thoughts and take control.

Parsimony that’s woven in a verse
is not a ploy to stymie or confuse.
A poem is not a sacrificial curse,
it’s only but the figment of a muse.

So read a poem for only what it’s worth
and let its image flow within your heart.
Conceive the seed of poetry as birth
and hold it close for it shall never part.

Just simplify the art and don’t forget
that metaphor's not meant to be a threat.

 

 

 

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  • echo-ink
    December 23, 2008

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    Yessa!!!

    Love this, HA!
    What a whimsy...keeping it simple by brainstorm...hehehe!
    I love you Amera, You are so...YOU!
    Thank God your on AP.

    Your Good friend always,

    Bell,

  • Papagallo
    December 18, 2008
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    another wow

    i like the third verse best here. it says it all. May life be good to you.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    I am left awed by your talent so often and leave a little disappointed in my own lack of talent when I do. You have such a mastery about your words. Well done hun. Congratulations on your silver trophy

  • ecrivain01
    December 3, 2008
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    Very nice ...

    and very nicely done. I particularly like the final couplet. Congrats on the shiny trophy too.


  • Lyndon gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Some excellent advice on the art of poetry. So many would be authors are intimated by the thought of "poetic device" yet when mastered it gives a poem layers of meaning and distinguishes it from mere prose.


  • Shimano
    December 3, 2008

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    Spell bound

    This is so different..Amazing write.I have read this many times and wish for more.


    you have stained my heart with this poem and I would like to put it on my page ...
    you have truly shaved and saved my soul

    "Just simplify the art and don’t forget
    that metaphor's not meant to be a threat"

    the last 2 lines has struck me in awe and a savour this thought

    Thnak you for sharing


  • Swan song gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh you clever and witty poet! This is a true gem and a joy to read in a big way I loved it and good luck
    You are very clever in this lovely poem and very very good I might add also


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Metaphor, like form, is a good servant but a bad master. You may quote me.

    A nicely-wrought poem, sis.


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    you are so wise, young Grasshoppah
    This gets a thumbs up and a hug
    Love, Lane


  • Faeryn
    November 28, 2008

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    ahh! The horrible memories of factoring come to mind with K.I.S.S.
    Amazing poem; love the message and the rhyming is awesome.
    Love,
    Tay


  • StarEyes
    November 28, 2008

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    How true Sis!!! What wonderful advice! Would be nice if more could do just that! Not everything is meant to be serious... Some of it is written for fun...

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Lovely advice! Keep it simple. Read it, enjoy it, take from it what it gives. Nice! Pam


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    November 28, 2008

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    hehehe! YEA! it's awesome, the rhyme i mean. but of course, you already know that.

    kass


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Very good advice, and that's the way it always should be. One reason your poetry is always so good for me is the fact that it always makes perfect sense and can be consumed like a rich dessert.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    haven't seen..

    Anyone utilize that(k.i.s.s.) term I had learned since I was studying electronics! not really sure if you meant keep- it simple- stupid, but based on this wonderful piece of art..i'd say it fits!

    • Amera gold member
      November 28, 2008
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      That's what it means alright! I wasn't sure if anyone would get it.

      Thank you


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Superb!

    A beautiful application of Occam's Razor in a new field.

    Wonderful rhyme and meter, of course and a message that those of us who struggle with th e dread beast metaphor need to heed!!


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008

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    Another amazing write! Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Good luck in the contest


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    to simply put it i think this is a wonderful read, i mean that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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