When it rains
I'll keep you dry
Dry your tears
When you cry
Cry for you
Each time you weep
Bring you dreams
In silent sleep.
Rain won't ever
Get you down
Wear a smile
No troubled frown
Frown no more
Laugh all day
Skies turn to blue
Which once were grey.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 10 Picture Prompts :) by Beauty Of Silence.
900 points, ended December 6, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Unlike those of flesh and blood who have the same limitations as we ourselves, imaginary friends may be whatever we desire or need. The poem is simple in rhyme and line, yet compels the mind to remember or wish for that ephemeral companion who is ever at hand to say,
"When it rains
I'll keep you dry"
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A simple poem that flowed superbly with good rhyming. An excellant response to the prompt!!
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Beautifully penned !
Perfect flow and rhyme. An excellent take on the given prompt and I wish you well in this contest
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Nicely constructed and rhymed and a good resonse to the picture/prompt. Very likeable poem.
Good luck,
Bill
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this was really sweet. it had great rhyme, and it flowed pretty well. this is lovely, and it expressed the picture pretty well
thanks so much for this write, and do keep penning
All the best,
RANJI
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Keith
This is so sweet. It should be a song. x Deb
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