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the greatest thing in life

 

 

i've thought about all the great things i've done
the accomplishments i've achieved

ceremonies, graduations

 perfomances in front of congregations

i traveled here and i've traveled there

but i might as well not traveled anywhere

because all that matters when i look back through

as you found me and i found you.

Author notes

Showing my thankfulness to my partner

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  • Sunkissed xo
    December 4, 2008
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    Aww how lovely
    So very true! We live such busy lives, such hectic schedules, and then we meet the person we love, and in the end it was definitely worth going through it all. I think lots of people can relate to this one. Very sweet indeed. Thanks for entering the contest!
    peace x


  • SaintSorrow
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow!

    I love this, and it's very true everything you've done seems like nothing when you find that person that you truly love.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    I so know this well!!

    All the applause and admiration from people really doesn't matter in the long run its the ones that truly love you ! thank you so much for entering in the contest blessings always

    Rend


  • astrum infractus
    November 28, 2008

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    I love this. A lot. It's so sweet and so true. Well done. abi x x x

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