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Envy





If an envy forever symbolizes
displaying satisfaction bizarre
will eventually feel
tremendous disappointment.

Gratification of a live,
without apparent reason,
don't appear
without ever come to front.

Some people don't understand
of a happy life forever
just because you follow
a path, not wanted to.










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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Jealousy

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 28, 2008

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    Beautiful. You wrote this so beautifully, and I could feel every word. It was like a punch in the gut. haha Amazinggg♥


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008
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    Amazing take on the prompt. Me likey! Well done and good luck to you in the contest.