Jesus our Saviour, born that glorious day
sent upon earth to show his sheep the way!
It was his fate, to save you and me
They believed him not, hung him on a tree!
Author notes
Eency weency spider climbed up the water spout,
down came the rain and washed the spider out,
out came the sun and dried up all the rain,
now eency-weency spider went up the spout again.
A contest entry
- Nursery Rhymes with a Holy Twist by heismysong.
700 points, ended December 8, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A cute piece...
A cute piece; congratulations on the shiny trophy; thanks for sharing. --Joe -
Thank you for entering this contest!
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Cute write.
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It's okay so far...
The rhythm of the poem is off, but I think you have a general idea. I can't wait to see the final revision!
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