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I'll Make You a Coffee


Bed was warm and cozy,
holiday, day to stay in.
Everything was quite rosy
dawn was about to begin.

I heard rummaging around
leaping out of bed,
trying not to make a sound
possible a thief…you instead.

Relief was on my face
Did you get out early?
Delicious kiss for taste
hug given so tenderly.

Strong cup of coffee
a walk by the sea...

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 15, 2008

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    Very nice and different. Damn, it makes me want someone to make me a cup of coffee in the morning, I only have me!