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Perfect Poison.

her perfumes like poison on your flesh.

dark red bruises on your thighs

and I don't question why or how you got them,

on the look in your eyes is passion...

I wasn't with you last night.

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A contest entry

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 28, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing, love. Simply amazing. You penned this so perfectly & beautifully, and I can just feel the jealousy in this piece.♥


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    wow, where did this come from, i see the abuse part of it, but there is something else i think i can't touch on, keep it flowing, i guess it is the need to pretend. good luck in the contest