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Buried Alive Inside Myself

Borrowing deep into my soul
hiding from my inner demons
Realizing I cannot hide from myself
beginning to dig my way out
Walls getting smaller around me
fighting the urge to give up
Digging faster
breathing shorter
Refusing to quit

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Your prompt this time - TUNNEL


A contest entry

Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Excellent! I love that this has an inspirational tone at the end. Thanks so much for your entry\
    gaylene


    • buffsab99
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank you so much, this sums up what I have been going through as I dig myself out of my troubles. Soon I hope to have worked through them all


  • Simply Olivia
    November 28, 2008
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    Great job!

    • buffsab99
      November 28, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you very much, just reflecting my current mood!